The legs are too simple you could have put more effort on them. The shirt is okay but, you can still improve. The arms are too simple what you wanna do is draw his left arm with layers of his sweater you want it to be a bit more realistic. The sword should have been bigger and finally his head could need some more darker colors and a bit rounder so it can look more like the character itself :3
2ndFoxChild
The legs are too simple you could have put more effort on them. The shirt is okay but, you can still improve. The arms are too simple what you wanna do is draw his left arm with layers of his sweater you want it to be a bit more realistic. The sword should have been bigger and finally his head could need some more darker colors and a bit rounder so it can look more like the character itself :3
sniperleader1337
thanks, i'll attempt to do this in future drawings.