funn!
a playful little theme you have here. this can go very far!
funn!
a playful little theme you have here. this can go very far!
I hope your right and thanks for the review! :D
koo.
my story 'll take place with some guy that's going to die anyways.
the dark hallways filled with the echo of colonel Rim's feet pounding on the ground. running blindly through the damp and forgotten hallways of a dark temple seeking to escape from his unknown chasers. he could feel his heart pounding as he ran around corner around corner only to get himself lost further into the endless maze of the temple. Rim was a 23 year old Colonel in the U.S. army, or what was left of it after the apocolyptic war back in the year 4078. he had been in the army for four years, and had never even been in a life threatening situation, having always commanded from a safe area. this was a new experience for him.
He was the only survivor of a science team sent into that old temple in the middle of nowhere to collect some samples. his team was told there was nothing to worry, and that there was nothing in the temple. upon entering the temple, his team managed to get into a room full of dead bodies and just assumed they were from burials happening years ago.
As Rim turned another corner he ran straight into something he mistook for the wall. just as he was about to back up and try a different direction, arms closed around his shaking body. breaking free of the grip, the scared colonel fired his assault rifle in randome directions, hoping to catch his unseen assailant.
As the rifle fire lit up the hallway, Rim could just barely make out the form of his attacker. scared way more than he had been in his entire life, he continued to run blindly through the corridors.
any hope of escaping left him when he ran headlong into a wall. pulling himself up, he realized he had run straight into a corner. he could hear his chasers closing in on him. as he slid a fresh clip into his assault rifle, he did something he had never done before. Colonel Rim prayed.
if you like it pm me and let me know.
nice tune.
i like it alot. if you ever need any inspiration i might be able to tell you a little story and get your motivator working again. i keep all my creativity inside because nobody likes me telling it. but if you need anything, i'll be glad to help!
Cool, i'll remember that the next time i'm inspirationless :-)
hmm.
hard to interpret this one. i love the tune though. the little bells gave it a frosty feeling.
Thanks!
the feeble army is stocking up for war
knowing that their army cant hold off the opposing force, using this time to let the families escape...
i love it. awesome little loop.
Thanks man! :-)
i dont find it very different.
as a matter of fact i like it alot!
once again, i love all of your works!
once again... Thanks! :D
the tavern tune.
luv it.
keep goin!
I will keep going! :D
Thanks for the review!
koo.
this is another of your songs that i find the "going somewhere and accomplishing something" theme in.
keep up the awesome work!
Thanks! :D
i love it!
i hope you dont mind if i compose a short little story for each of your songs. it's just what i see in them.
after months of endless siege and sleepless nights, the village needed somebody to help them fight off the evil prowling through their village.
this song is the part where the hero comes striding in and helps them.
an abrupt end i know, but this is a review. keep going i love all of your songs!
It's cool when you write a little story.
I really like to see how people feel about my songs.
Thanks for the review!
*sniff*
it seems like the main hero just died.
i love teh song. makes me think.
It's always cool when i make someone think...
Thanks for the review!
Something tells me I should get back on NG and make more friends. >_>
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